It was a good description of the action, ball movement in Four Square. Your character may not have been good at it but I’ll bet you were. The example is a good one to illustrate your point. Well done.
I've seen that machete up close and while it remains sharp enough to give a scene a haircut, the deep swings taken in the tall weeds of early drafts are strong enough to carve a path towards story.
It was a good description of the action, ball movement in Four Square. Your character may not have been good at it but I’ll bet you were. The example is a good one to illustrate your point. Well done.
I was terrible at four square 😂
Thanks, as always, for reading!
Chop chop friend.
I've seen that machete up close and while it remains sharp enough to give a scene a haircut, the deep swings taken in the tall weeds of early drafts are strong enough to carve a path towards story.
Great advice Julia!